January
2008 Sermon Tip --
Crafting an Outstanding Sermon – Part Three (of Three)
Over the past
two months, we have explored the basic formula for creating a solid
presentation. As a reminder, the formula is:
• Say what
you’re going to say (aka the Introduction)
• Then say it (aka the Body)
• And then say what you said (aka the Conclusion)
But, to craft
an outstanding sermon, there’s more -- you need glue to hold
it all together and you need pictures to bring color to your points.
First, the glue . . .
Transitions
as the Glue to Hold Your Talk Together
Transitions ensure
that your talk flows and that your congregation stays with you.
They are so basic that speakers often forget them, but they can
make an average sermon polished and professional. They should occur
between each point within the body of your presentation. They keep
the flow going and give your listeners a roadmap. Rule of thumb:
Use one any time you finish a thought and are ready to move on to
a new idea. Transitions are meant to be noticed – if they
are too subtle, they may be missed and your listeners will be on
Topic A when you have moved to Topic B. Effective transitions can
be:
• Bridge
words – furthermore, meanwhile, in addition, nevertheless,
moreover, therefore, consequently, finally.
• A rhetorical
question – e.g., after covering a particular teaching point,
you could say, “Now, how will this idea affect your life?
We’ll answer that question in just a moment.”
• A Flashback
– Repeat something now that you’ve already said. Using
the same example, you could say, “Now that we’ve covered
A, B and C, let’s examine how they will affect your life.”
• A Flashforward
– A transition in advance. Mention something that you will
refer to later. Then do a flashback when you get there. “As
I said before, ….”
• Point-by-Point
– Mini-summary of what already has been covered – it
lets your listeners see/remember how everything fits together; don’t
overuse mini-summaries – they can be monotonous.
• Pause
– Nonverbal transition that helps your listeners shift focus
with you. Because a pause will seem eternal to you, but may not
be noticed by the listeners, internally count to 5 or so. Don’t
overuse pauses or your delivery may seem slow and stilted.
• Physical
Movement – Another effective nonverbal transition. Do the
opposite of what your listeners have gotten used to. If you’ve
been standing behind a lectern, move away. If you’ve been
moving, suddenly stand still.
Sources of
Support (SOSs) To Bring Color and Aliveness To Your Talk
The final ingredient
to a memorable presentation is creating pictures that bring your
points to life, that drive them home, and that make them stick –
SOSs or “windows.”
SOSs or windows
keep your listeners engaged. They sustain your listeners’
interest and involvement. They make your presentation lively and
interesting.
Choose your SOSs
with care – make certain they are relevant, and they clearly
support the point. They are not meant to be the main focus of your
talk, but instead they are used to support the focus. The best way
to use SOSs is to mix them up – mix humor with analogies with
anecdotes with quotations with questions with activities. To be
more specific, SOSs can be:
• Examples/Illustrations
– Personal stories from you or members of your congregation
(remember to get permission before sharing anyone’s personal
story other than your own).
• “Human
Interest” Stories.
• Quotations
– They bring authority to a point, often with some humor or
irony.
• Restatement
– Distill all you’ve said (within that point) to a few
key words. Or, summarize by giving the listeners a list of practical
tips. When you say, “Here are 5 steps you can take to eliminate
this problem,” you often will see a demonstration of heightened
interest as people pick up their pens/pencils to write.
• Historical
References – Good to bring precedent or authority to a point.
• Startling
Statistic or Startling Statements
• Humor
– Humor is a very powerful way to bring home a point. It’s
also terrific for establishing rapport with your listeners and getting
their attention. Humor doesn’t necessarily mean telling jokes.
If you can’t tell your friends a joke and get them to laugh,
then telling them during a sermon might not be your best strategy.
But you can use exaggerations, see the irony in something or use
a touch of self-deprecation to interject humor.
Humor is extremely
effective when something unexpected or embarrassing happened, such
as you trip over your feet or your words, you spill your water or
you lose your train of thought. When you can laugh at yourself in
such a situation, you go a long way to diffuse the discomfort on
the part of your listeners.
• Audio
Visuals – Can be very effective SOS tools.
• Relevant
References (e.g., current events, movies, books) – Current
events are ripe sources for making your points.
• Hypothetical
Story or “Parable” – A good way to drive home
a point.
Final Thoughts
on Creating an Outstanding Sermon
This month and
the past two months have offered you a formula for creating impactful,
memorable sermons. Please take what works for you and leave the
rest. And remember, while it is helpful to have a structure, to
have bridges and to have anecdotes and examples, all of these ideas
are as important collectively as passion for your work is singularly.
When you are passionate about your message and about sharing that
message with your congregation, you can’t help but motivate,
inspire and call forth transformation in your congregation. Blessings!
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